Sunday, March 29, 2015

Lindsey

3 comments:

  1. I love your music choice Lindsey! You were really good at talking and you sounded really confident in yourself, and were very fluent. Nice job!

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  2. I love your quote at the beginning: "...experiencing life through the lens of the fictional worlds we created for ourselves." It is a very clever and creative phrase. Also, I loved how it started with a classic childhood scene, but then morphed into sophisticated and mature thoughts and ideas! Very good job!

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  3. The way you spoke made me feel like you had a very strong belief in creativity! It made me really believe what you were saying and wanted me to hear more! I enjoyed your music, I think it went well with your writing! Your essay was very well written! Great job!

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