Sunday, March 29, 2015

Elliot

2 comments:

  1. This is a very powerful and emotional story and I think you did a great job telling it. Your music choice was perfect in regards to your topic as well, great job!

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  2. I really enjoyed your choice of song because it fit the essay perfectly! Your story of why family is important got your point across in a emotional way as well. Awesome job (:

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