I hate posting last because it just seems that I'm coping other people's responses, but I have to say the quote was a nice touch. It strengthen your argument, and it directly connected with everything that you had said in your Podcast. Music was nice, and the way your voice portrayed your essay added a sort of emotion to the essay.
I really like how the music tied in with your theme and the quote at the end was a really nice way to bring the essay to an end.
ReplyDeleteThe pace of your voice was great, it didn't feel rushed or dragged out. The quote really was a great way to conclude. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteI hate posting last because it just seems that I'm coping other people's responses, but I have to say the quote was a nice touch. It strengthen your argument, and it directly connected with everything that you had said in your Podcast. Music was nice, and the way your voice portrayed your essay added a sort of emotion to the essay.
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